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TG of Spelunking by unit1138 TG of Spelunking by unit1138
Many moons later A prequel to 

Some People Get All The Luck TG


I liked it art wise, writing wise not as much.
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animal-delos Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2016   Writer
They should consider themselves lucky that that's all they found spelunking. I've seen The Descent, I know how bad it can be.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Edited Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Good cap. Perhaps a third part is needed where they overcome the differences and come together as a couple..?..
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist
Yeah perhaps, I can't decide if I'd want to take it in a sexual or heartfelt direction. Which is part of how I ended up settling on a prequel in the first place.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Perhaps do both and have one as an alternate ending, or even a second/third alternate ending where, though sad they do drift apart. 
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist
Admit it, you just want me to make more captions period :P
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AnonymousGX Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016
Actually, I think this particular story is almost unique, and too good to be left unresolved.

Personally, Tough Girl would make the opening move to express herself. The real question is how Timid Girl will react, and if their new feelings let them become a couple or just remain close friends.
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ShinPersonaMaster Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
I just get ideas at times and things flow. ^^; Yeah, and the pics you do for them are great too.
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msflurker Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Student General Artist
This just conveys the awkwardness caused by the curse. The use of the split format just helps it a lot.
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2016  Hobbyist
Yes! All in all I rather like these ones.
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TGCapsLover Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016
definitely funny
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2016  Hobbyist
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goldwyn11 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016
The artwork definitely shows improvement from when you wrote the original one. I like the story behind this, how they're both fighting the curse in their own way, and they end up interfering with each other accidentally.
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016  Hobbyist
^ ^ thanks

Good guy goldwyn.
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goldwyn11 Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2016
You bet, I was a big fan of the first one ^^
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unit1138 Featured By Owner Edited Sep 4, 2016  Hobbyist
It's a unit classic, sort of the predecessor to the captions I've been doing in over the last couple months
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